Princess Revision: Chapter One, Scene Four
SEPTEMBER 6, 1966 I was standing in the rain in front of his car as he was fixing the flat. I noticed his high cheekbones, and watched...
Princess Revision: Chapter One, Scene Four
Princess Revision: Chapter One – Scene Three
Princess Revision: Chapter One – Scene Two
Princess Revision: Chapter One – Scene One
Princess Revision: The Prologue
Pacing Problems
Drawn-out Dialogue
Scene Clarity
Adding Texture and Dimension
POV Changes
The beginning of my story