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Welcome to my newest blog. I’m here to help, but you can help me by following my posts and interacting with the discussions. My aim is to rewrite a story I wrote when I was sixteen or seventeen, when I was completely oblivious to the art and craft of writing good literature. Now that I have a few “seasons” under my belt, I want to go through what I’ve learned along the way and what I would do to improve my work if I were to attempt to have it published now.

I will also explain my revision choices and detail why I’ve made changes, and why I’ve kept my original sentence (if I keep any at all!) Feel free to chime in when you feel I’m wrong or if you are in total agreement.

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