Pacing ProblemsI came home from school with a headache. The kids seemed to be getting rowdier everyday. I suddenly remembered I’d have to get Rellie’s...
POV ChangesScene 2 I was getting ready for school when the phone rang. I answered it and it was my best friend, Rellie. She sounded tired. “Listen,...
The beginning of my storyTreasures Rellie was walking home from school when an old man came up to her and asked her where the nearest hospital was. “Go down this...